In the progression from my preliminary task to my final task, first of all I learnt about the 3 colour scheme and the rule of thirds.When I did my preliminary, I didn't really have much of an idea of the three colour schemes, or the rule of thirds. As I progressed into my final product, I picked up the skills with help from my teachers and implementing these into my music magazine.
Secondly, from my cover to contents pages in my preliminary,there wasn't really a consistent colour scheme or layout. This gave off an unprofessional image for my school magazine as it was very untidy and inconsistent and it looked like not as much effort was put into creating it due to the lack of time, only having a week to complete the prelim. Although my cover does show some elements of a professional magazine, such as the large masthead at the top of the page and what looks like some rules of thirds which I didn't really notice or know of at the time, with the model in the middle, and the cover lines on either side. There are too many fonts in use of the cover so it looks a bit untidy. I have learnt in my final product to stick to 2 or 3 fonts instead of the many on my school magazine. My cover lines are too high which meant that there is too much dead space around the masthead and at the bottom of the magazine.
I have learnt that dead space gives off an unprofessional look as it looks so empty and it is essential to be filled in a professional magazine, which has hardly any dead space. Looking at my coursework magazine compared to my prelim, there is much less dead space on my pages.
I have learnt that I should have also included a main coverline as it would draw the reader’s attention more. On the contents page, I felt that the numbers running down the corridor was an effective idea as it would look simple; looking at it I now feel that it looks untidy as the numbers aren't really in line with the wall and the alternating pattern of colours is lost halfway down the page. Also, the lighting is too bright for the image, the cover image is pixellated and it isn't symmetrical. On my final product, it is clear and more symmetrical.
My contents page has a lot more structure than the preliminarytask as on the final contents page, I used the gridlines on Photoshop. I havelearnt how to use Photoshop to its full effect, and cut down on the number offonts that I have used.
Looking at the prelim and the final product together, I feelthat I have drastically improved on style as I have learnt more about magazinelayouts, as I did my prelim before any of my research and planning had takenplace. My knowledge was limited then. The masthead is in a more eye catchingposition and not as over the top as my prelim. I have changed from a mid shotto a close-up for my models as the eyes attract attention to the artist and thecover lines below, which it didn't before as they were too high up with no maincover line.
In the progression from the preliminary to now, I have learnt how to incorporate all of these skills in order to create a more complete, professional look. I learnt that keeping the model relaxed is essential for taking images as if the artist is in a bad mood or a bit camera shy, this will reflect in the images. The artist will look awkward if they are not relaxed in front of the camera, which gives off an unprofessional look. This is reflected in the fact that the model on my final product looks more relaxed than the model on my prelim. A relaxed model will look more comfortable in themselves and it shows off their individuality in order to create a more natural look.
I also had more time to complete my final music magazine which is reflected in the vastly improved style. This is the main reasoning for my progression as the prelim was very rushed which is reflected in the messy style of my magazine, whereas in my music magazine, it was cleaner and looked like more time had been put into it.





