Thursday, 7 February 2013

Drafts




4 comments:

  1. Good use of 3 palette colour scheme throughout the pages, creates a balance on the pages.
    Make the mast head stick out among the rest of the heading + maybe could do with something more on the contents and double page.

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  2. Front Cover

    Positive- Having the artists name in red font makes it strong and clear and the font used on the masthead suits the magazines feel.

    To make it better- Make it look more professional by changing the guitar image and making the top strapline centralised.

    Contents page

    Positive- The information on the contents page adds authenticty and credibility to the publication.

    To make it better- Make the page numbers a different colour so they stand out, this would make the contents page easier to navigate.

    Double page spread

    Positive- The article looks professional and clear in collumns.

    To make it better- Consider using the space at the end of the article as this is just empty.


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  3. Front Cover
    Positive - This cover is very nicely laid out and is conventional.

    Negative - Doesn't look very professional and i don't like the font used for the masthead.

    Contents
    Positive - Colour scheme works well through the three pages

    Negative - The text is all messy and looks very unorganised.

    Double Page Spread
    Positive - Good amount of text used on the double page and laid out in columns to look professional.

    Negative - The image looks squashed and there is lots of empty space where the text could continue to make look more professional and real.

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  4. front cover: positive - positioning image
    negative - doesn't look very professional with small image in the corner

    contents: positive - good use of headers for each section and nice conventional colour scheme.
    negative - font isn't organised in sections properly which gives off an unprofessional look.

    double page spread: positive - the use of a pull quote at the top of the article is good.
    negative - image position isn't in line with the text properly, this can give off n unprofessional look.

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